CrEaTivItY

I always herd that creativity cannot be learnt from here and there , it just comes out .I took this statement for granted . I love to paint and so whenever i used to sit to paint i used to think creativity will come from inside , i just need to sit with a brush in my hand thinking what to draw , ย ideas never used to come , i usually used to give up on the ” creativity coming on its own ” part and look at some thing and draw it as it is … But today i got to experience what really the coming from within is , simply sitting on facebook , donโ€™t know from where i got the idea to write a poem and this came out :

A fire ignited , there was fragrance ,

another ignited , there was smoke ,

i had to choose , fragrance or smoke .

A fire ignited , there was inertia in life ,

another ignited , there was enthusiasm ,

i had to choose , enthusiasm or inertia .

A fire ignited , there was lust ,

another ignited , there was creativity ,

i had to choose , lust or creativity .

A fire ignited , there was greed ,

another ignited , there was genrosity ,

i had to choose , generosity or greed .

A fire ignited , there was love ,

Another ignited , there was fear ,

I had to choose , love or fear .

A fire ignited , there was fragrance ,

another ignited , there was smoke ,

i had to choose , fragrance or smoke .

The fire still burns in me , unaware if its fragrance or smoke ,

fragrance or not , smoke or not , i cannot choose …

CAN YOU ???


I was simply amazed at myself being able to write such a nice poem ( if i may say so ) , now i know what creativity coming from inside means ๐Ÿ˜‰

P.S โ€“ This is my first peom ever , so obviously there will be mistakes , constructive criticism is welcome ๐Ÿ™‚

Love

Kullu.

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3 Comments

  1. This is not bad for you first poem. I enjoyed reading it. It presents a fork a in the road type of deal. I like the end : CAN YOU??? part because it challenges the reader to think about which they would choose. it also presents the notion of being torn between two choices. Nice job!

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